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Conversation...
Conversation waiting for the Train
1.
It pisses me off when he pretends
to sleep like that –
his eyelids flutter and that's how I know he's faking.
Maybe I will live in Battery Park…
Dirty grey water slapping against the wall –
Why a wall?
That way no hypodermic sand.
Ha ha.
Mmm.
The statue's nice, too, when you can see it.
I like the trees best, and the
grass.
The bums are interesting –
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Fugue
I found her in a tree, once.
She was sittin' stuck in the uppermost branches, serene and unsurprised as an angel on Christmas morning. Dappled light inked her pretty with the shadows of leaves, and her fingers faintly tapped the rhythm of a bright hymn on the burdened limb.
"Hello!" she called, miraculously. The sun made a silhouette of her waving arm, and I breathed for the first time in hours. Her face looked so sweet, smilin' and brilliant. Though she was only a few dozen feet up, she looked down at me as though she was ages and miles away.
"Susan, get down from there," I yelled. "Momma's worried," I added in a mutter, my gaze scurr
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The Great Wall
When papers ask me where I'm from, I write "Seattle," because they don't want to know the real answer. When people ask me where I'm from, I say "downtown," and they take a good look at me and take that to mean "Chinatown."
My parents run one of the zillion dim sum restaurants here. They're what the white kids at school call "fresh off the boat." Most of the people here are. They don't speak English at home, and they try not to at work. They don't watch anything on American TV; they read the local Chinese paper and watch the one Asian channel, pausing to turn off the TV in disgust whenever one of the five daily Korean soap operas comes on. On
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Still working on some stuff concerning Red and her dad. Sorry this is shit. It's for class, and I was rushing.
If you're confused, her dad is getting deported and didn't bother to tell anyone until the day of the hearing. Oops.
If you're confused, her dad is getting deported and didn't bother to tell anyone until the day of the hearing. Oops.
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UnusualverbtenseYAY!
Sorry, I love reading present-tense writing. Can't do it worth *blankity-blank*, but I love it.
Also, little Red =
Aww...... *huggles* It's okay Red, later on in your life you meet a super sexy wolf....
One thing, why, if Red's mom is dropping the f-bomb, does she pull back when she says "for Pete's sake"? She strikes me as the sort who'd say "for God's sake," or "for sh*t's sake." Pete is a little childish.
Sorry, I love reading present-tense writing. Can't do it worth *blankity-blank*, but I love it.
Also, little Red =
Aww...... *huggles* It's okay Red, later on in your life you meet a super sexy wolf....One thing, why, if Red's mom is dropping the f-bomb, does she pull back when she says "for Pete's sake"? She strikes me as the sort who'd say "for God's sake," or "for sh*t's sake." Pete is a little childish.